Thursday 12 July 2018

C4T2 : Feedback

 Sadly, Soff pulled out of judging, so our former manager Jenna (kittywaytocute) took over for now. We will be on the look out for a permanent replacement. Both Fonti and Luiza are on holiday, while Lucy and Leigh have had birthdays, so unfortunately this resulted in a few unintended delays, and we apologize for that!.
As your next task takes 2 weeks, we hope to find a permanent replacement judge before it is due. Unfortunately, we can't make any promises.

We also welcome Ashleighdana as a replacement for Dolphin316 as the next task required even numbers, and AD only missed out being a contestant by a coin flip! Unfortunately, we also have to eliminate someone - and, having not entered at all,  noismini is eliminated. This tasks winner, ASB10, receives +0.5 for her next score.

  1. ASB10 - 7.68
  2. Alma1902 - 7.5
  3. Bueno-koekje_xx - 7.37
  4. AshleighDana - 7.35
  5. Aniyah-xxxx - 7.25
  6. xmackennax - 7.18
  7. BibikaEmonik - 7
  8. Green_lady_m - 6.93
  9. lostjetty - 6.81
  10. CharmedAvenger - 5.56
  11. Noismini - 0

 Alma1902 = 7 + 0.5 = 7.5

Lucy - The lack of backpiece isn't bad, but I do think this could have benefited from a bag. I love the colour choices here, and the jacket is definitely a difficult shape to work with.

Leigh - I wouldn't have noticed the lack of backpiece if you hadn't mentioned it! But the lack of bag... I already don't like that belt, so maybe a fanny pack? And personally I don't really love this, to me it looks like two outfits, the pants+belt and top+jacket got all smushed together. The colours aren't working to me.

Soff - I love the way how you combined the colors, but I think a bag wouldn't be bad tho.As Lucy said also, the jacket looks perfect in your outfit. Good job dear!

Fonti - I love the jacket, it is awesome and an eye trap. Yet I would never match it with these pants. I gave the outfit a low score because I had to look twice to track the dots. I like the shoes' matching but I really miss a bag.



Aniyah-xxxx = 7.25

Lucy - This is somewhat plainer than what I had been expecting. I'm not the biggest fan of the top or the bag. It's definitely very summery and vibrant, and you've included sunglasses and earrings which is nice. I just hoped to see...more.

Leigh - Yeah, I'm with Lucy, this is weirdly plain looking. Without the prints I'd call it boring. Nice to see some small details but layers, even a belt or some sheer sleeves would have made this cooler.

Soff- The outfit would look great with another top. As Lucy and Leigh said above, this is a plain looking , but with a belt and another top would look better.

Fonti - I like your intention to risk with such intensive patterns. I like everything in your look and I feel that it wasn't so easy to make your mix&matching, still you've made it to captivate the attention. What I don't like is that I cannot put it in a place, the half of it would be place by the beach and some details (earrings & pumps) moves it late evening out.

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ASB10 = 7.68

Lucy - Why no bag? I love the various layered shirts and the addition of the 'sorry' pin. The two prints go very well together. I'm less happy with those shoes, I would have liked a more sporty, practical shoe since the rest of this is a very casual, hip-hop aesthetic.

Leigh - Oh those shoes, honey no. They're like circus stilts! And with the pants, your bottom half looks like a clowns! I like the top a lot and the pants could have been OK if not for those shoes. And like Lucy I wonder why not bag?

Soff - I would definitely change the shoes. With other shoes the outfit would look perfect. I like the pants and the top, but I was waiting for other shoes whatever. Good job sweetie!

Fonti - You depicted the theme in a simple, yet crystal clear way. Your style makes a difference and I like it. Be more careful with the right fitting (your dotted tulle top should be resized). Keep it up. 


LostJetty - 6.81


Leigh - What's with the long shirt and the belt in the middle?! No no no!! It looks so mid-2000s with the wide leg pants and that's NEVER good. And those sunglasses in, what, a winter look?  I actually really do love the colours in this, they're interesting and subtle. But everything else is just... not good.

Lucy - Hooo boy. Honestly, I think Leigh's comment nailed this for me. The belt in the middle of a tunic is so random - heck, the fact you picked a tunic with flared pants just screams of something Ashley Tisdale would wear in 2005. And we'd all like to forget about that era. Honestly, if you'd just put the tunic under the pants and put the belt there, it would have been so, so much better.

Soff - I like how you combined the colors dear, but with these belt in the middle it really don't look good in the outfit. As Leigh said, it would never work with the wide leg pants.

Fonti  - It is a look influenced from earlier decade as other judges stated but I really like it. Your colors and patterns look so finely combined to me. There are a few details that I loved, such as the choice of your bag-belt-pumps. I would possibly change the top with a chiffon blouse to make it a more safe entry, but not that I really mind yours that much.


AshleighDana - 7.35


Lucy -  If this was in your suite, I wouldn't mention it, but since you're in the plaza and have free hair available, I have to say this wig was not your best choice. And I'm not a fan of those shoes. But, I'm glad we can welcome you to the cycle, because I love your use of pastels against black! And you've made wonderfully subtle use of the prints and textures here too. 

Leigh - I like the patterns, and really do love the jacket. But is there not nearly too much going on with this?  A plainer bag and shoe would have made the jacket look more important which is what stand out to me with this. I don't mind the hair that much, it's short so we can see your whole look.

Fonti - I like your inner suite in blue. The dots' top looks weird to me, like you put it there only because of the task, even if it does not make sense. The bag is ok. But if you wear a raincoat then what are you doing with these open toe heeled sandals. It is a very confusing outfit for me.

Jenna - I like the pink and not the blue haha, I am more of a barbie than bratz doll. I like the layered top but it makes you shoe and bottom plain. Dislike like the choker much too.



xmackennax - 7.18


Lucy -  I don't know how to feel about this. I really love this in some ways... but I'm not totally sure the top and pants work together! I would have either used plainer pants, or a plainer top, but then I suppose it would not longer meet the task requirements. Which is a shame, since I love your use of colour here, white boots and jackets are difficult to pull off and you definitely do. 

Leigh - I actually like the top and pants!  Personally I would have wanted more details here, like earrings and a belt. But the white and red pop out very well and the shirt layers are very crafty.

Fonti - Interesting outfit. I would look at it on the streets. I like the choice of these trousers combined with your dotted up part, cause it is like an impressionistic approach of the task. The blazer with the booties look super fine. The bag is ok.

Jenna - I like this all a lot :) Maybe not the red lipstick with red hair but that's not a judging matter since it's not really bad or stopping the look at all. Yay!


Green_lady_m - 6.93

Lucy -  So, one thing I always advise is to read through other people's feedback - because just like Dolphin316 last week, you've totally failed to crop your doll properly. It's not something we score for, but it's definitely very annoying as it makes your outfit seem a lot smaller and makes it harder to see the details in it. But as for your outfit, you've triggered one of my biggest pet peeves - putting gold and silver together by accident. If not for the tassel, you would have been ok, and I would have preferred red earrings or shoes to it anyhow. I love the top half of this with the layering of the sleeves, but the bag is far more casual than this outfit deserves. 

Leigh - Crop, girl, come on! Clearly you can, so why do it so big? It's not like you even have anything in that room so why show it? Like Lucy said we loose out the details. The choice of prints is really well done and the black-and-white really looks good on you. I like the layering too but for me the accessories are just a no. The bag is too relaxed, the pops of red just look random and unbalanced,  and I don't like such a floaty belt with the structure of the rest. 

Fonti - Hmm. Interesting outfit. I like you chose to invest on a Black&White look. Your custom made top is cute and looks even more cute with your pencil skirt. I love your belt and bag. Safe shoes' choice. Smart burgundy pop us. It is not a fascinating outfit to drive me crazy but it is a safe one, so I'll buy it.

Jenna - Yes, I think this is a safe one, the patterns look good as they are but then your items with it are a big no no. The red is very badly placed and the bag is too much chunky and relaxed.


CharmedAvenger - 5.56



Fonti - It is a cool dress, so it's ok that you decided to invest on it ! But why didn't you try on styling it a bit and make something more unique with it ? I feel like it could never be matched with this coat, unless maybe if you had tried more with your accessories to be somewhere in the middle of these two. Very basic entry, you should have worked it more.

Lucy - I'm not a fan of this. I wish you'd broken up all the prints with something, a belt of a layer between them perhaps. The choker is very gothic which makes absolutely no sense with an otherwise business-lady outfit, and paired with the glasses and earrings there's far too much going on around your head. I'll give you props for trying to combine two very awkward items - the dress and jacket - but it just did not pay off.

Leigh - Oh. Well this is ... underwhelming. But also overwhelming, because Lucy nailed it with the accessories, it's all too much and the choker doesn't go. I like that you tried to combine the tiger and spot prints which no-one else has, but that's about it.

Jenna - Oh no :( I see red and black are popular with the cycle now but that makes your looks seem worse when you see the others do the same better. The choker is very bad. The prints were brave but only that is very good. I think you should learn using the plaza and imgur instead and give us a good look that way.

Fonti -  It is a cool dress, so it's ok that you decided to invest on it ! But why didn't you try on styling it a bit and make something more unique with it ? I feel like it could never be matched with this coat, unless maybe if you had tried more with your accessories to be somewhere in the middle of these two. Very basic entry, you should have worked it more.



BibikaEmonik = 7

Lucy - What the hell did you do when you cropped this??? What's with the big white, unnecessary square?! Go read Dolphin316's feedback from last week... or Green_Lady_M's this week. The only time a lack of cropping is excusable is if you used the stardoll camera like Charmed_Avenger, but you all used imgur so what's your excuse??? Argh. Anyway, this outfit is somewhat reminiscent of something I've done, and the shapes look a lot like xmackennax's - that's not a bad thing, because I like it, it's just very well-used at the moment. I like the pops of red and the accessories are well done, I don't love the bag but I can live with it.

Leigh - Lucy's done the cropping rant for me, but seriously, I'd like to know why you added the big white square! I just can't figure out your reasoning there. Anyway, I personally am not the biggest fan of the very wide, loose sleeves with the already wide pants, and I don't like the bag much. I do like the necklace and red pops a lot, and the layering around the top.

Jenna - Oh no no, why the white space???  Your look is nice enough, not my style I think so I don't know much I can say here. Again, red and black are on and I think I could get very sick of seeing it this cycle but you aren't the only one with it. Like Leigh I don't like loose top with bottoms. The layers are nice though.

Fonti - Your black to black choice of polka-dots trousers' does not exactly scream for polka-dots' attention! I had to check twice to track the dots, so somehow you have missed the point for me! However, you have a good styling, a fine mix&matching of your clothes, it looks like a cute French style and safe layering.


Bueno-koekje_xx = 7.375


Lucy - Loose on loose is just not flattering, at all. Which is a shame, since I like how experimental this is in other aspects. It's very coachella - with a hint of grunge perhaps. The colours are intriguing and the patterns are subtle but definitely there. I don't think the bangles were really needed given how bulky the bag is.

Leigh - I'm with Lucy, loose-on-loose just makes you look like you're trying to hide something, it's not flattering. But the patterns and textures are cool and I love the sorta festival-witch vibe.

Jenna- This is different! I love paisley and purples but I think Leigh's 'festival-witch' is good for it. Your accessorize confuse me with the chunky bits and then fines bits, better to pick one style I think.

Fonti -  You have used the same trousers as BibikaEmonik, the one with the hard-to-track dots and as I said before to Bib. I would have expected a more intensive choice of dots. However you have done a great styling in here! I love it looks like a vintage interpretation, I like the use of purple, the long necklace, the hat, everything. Awesome styling. 



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