Tuesday 6 March 2018

Task 8 Feedback

Task 8 is over - and the semi-finals are coming! 

Unfortunately, we have to say goodbye to Me4evr  first.
The winner of this task was 
Noismini! For the semi-finals, we will not be adding the +0.5 you get for the previous rounds winnings.

LoveFotinh - 8.75

Mireia - I'm pretty impressed with how your task turned out! Both your outfits are perfect for the necklaces you picked, first looks the same and second looks amazing with the necklace. Really good job! On the first outfit I'm a little confused with what is picking out under the fur though, and I'm not very into the outfit by itself. However it is reminding me of the necklace so points for that. The second outfit is... perfect!!

Lucy - I love the colours of both looks, as they tie in excellently with the necklaces! Like M, I'm a bit confused as to the items poking out from under the fur jacket. The second look ties together some super tricky pieces in a way that totally works, and I love it! I might have put the bag in the other hand, but that's just pickyness.

Leigh - The first one does match the necklace but to me it seems just too plain. The layers you have, as the other two said already, don't do anything good.  I would have liked to see some kind of stripe as that's the way some of the rows are beaded. But it's okay...the secondly look totally wins though, the shapes and layers are awesome!

Myrthe -  Wow I love the colours of your outfits, one is very bright and the other one is toned done. They are two opposites of each other. The bright colours of outfit 1 really match the necklace and the vibe. You managed to create a well composed outfit and use all the colours without overdoing it. Like Mireia I'm wondering what's poking under the fur tho. For your second outfit I love the items you used, they are very special and hard to make an outfit with. You managed to do it and looks great and creative! Well done. 

Louisa.karemina - 7.125

Mireia  - So, first look looks to flowy for me. If you go for this loose trousers I would have liked something more tight on the upper part or the other way round. Also, even if the necklace does not look bad with the outfit, I have the feeling like with that big necklace your outfit would be too much, cause it already looks complete without the necklace somehow. About your second outfit, I love it! But, it's more discrete than the necklace. I get where the inspiration comes from, but you would have needed more colour into your outfit and more baroque feeling.

Lucy - I'm sort of unsure as to...well, all of this. As Mireia  pointed out, the first look's flowy structure just would look way too much if you added the neckalce - even as it is, it's overwhelming, especially with being almost all pink. The second look has a similar issue - I actually love it for an outfit, but for the necklace, there's so much going on around the top area, I think it would get lost - or just look overwhelming. The colours on both looks are really well matched though, which can be hard to pull off with pastels.

Leigh - I think I've seen to many all pastel looks lately, I sort of left judging these to last....but oh that first look, the pants are a no, and why on EARTH are you using a dress under pants???????  The second look, like Lucy, I really like to look at, but think there is a LOT going on up the top already so adding the necklace to that might not go well. The bag is an odd choice.

Myrthe - I agree with Mireia that your first outfit is too flowy, the pants would have looked better with a tight top. The necklace with that top part would have been even more bombastic. The colours would look good with it, but the structure and feeling of the first outfit isn't right for me. I like the look you went for on the second outfit, but I would have done something totally different with that necklace. Something more toned down so the necklace would jump out and be the special piece of your together, combined with some little details with pops of colour. 


Me4evr - 6.18

M - Both your entries are good but they look like something is missing, like you should take one step forward for creating more outstanding outfits. The colour interpretation of the first necklace you choose is great, but the style doesn't quite fully match. It's not bad, but I think you could have done better. Also, sunglasses and clutch kinda look out of place. For the second outfit, I love the necklace you chose, very original! And I like your "galactic" outfit, but I still can't picture both together, which is not so good for the purpose of the task.

Lucy - Like Mireia , something is just missing from both looks, and the aesthetics aren't quite what I felt fit either necklace. Initially I wasn't too into the colours, either, but they're passable.  The second necklace was one of the more random looking ones, and there's a lot you could have taken from it - which is why just doing pastels was a little bit of a let down to me.

Lucy - The colours I... I don't know. It's sort of been said already, there's a lot you could have done here that just didn't happen, more than anything actually being bad, there's just a lack of anything going on. It's just a bit late on in the cycle for that.

Myrthe - The colour use of your both outfits is correct, but they are too simplistic. Especially for your first outfit. I think a more boohoo outfit style would have matched the style of this necklace better. It uses more natural stones. I'm not a fan of the glasses and the bag you used with it, since it's white and looks totally random with the other colours. Your second outfit is a little bit better, you used more items here. But I wish I saw something more and new! The style matches the necklace, but I expected more 


Noismini - 8.52 + 0.5 = 9.02

M - The outfit for necklace B... I'm loving it so much! The outfit by itself looks amazing, and with the pop of that necklace must be still more gorgeous. Love how you have combined orange, red and blue! Wow! Just imaging this colours together make me scream, but you made it and looks amazing! For the outfit for necklace E, it gives me similar vibes for the geometry of the necklace and the shape of your outfit, but I'm missing some more red into your outfit. I love the make up you used, cause that's totally the necklace, but I would have liked to see some more red besides the earrings.

Lucy - I absolutely adore the colours you went for out of the first necklace! I sort of wish you'd thrown a little pastel pink in, but I don't miss it too much. The little bit of yellow on the Fenid strap ets some serious bonus points for detail! The second look is definitely loud looking, but taking a moment it ends up rather simple. Like Mireia I would have loved to see more red as well.

Leigh - You're all reading my mind! Outfit one, the colours and textures are really awesome and nicely balanced, and there's like a featured pop in each section so adding the necklace would even make it a rounded out which is perfect.The second looks un-cordinated to me, the dress print versus the bag print is odd and more of the primary colours - red, blue, yellow - would have worked better.

Myrthe - I love what you did here! I like the structure of the tight jumpsuite with that flowy cardigan. Good combination. Good eye for the colours here, you managed to use the colours of your necklace into your look to make it a whole. It would look so good with that necklace on. The second outfit has an interesting shape and looks like the shape of the necklace which is a nice detail! I agree with Mireia that it misses some red. I do think it's nice you used red earrings and the blue make-up! 




1 comment:

  1. thank you for your feedback. Below the fur, apart from the dress, I have the bag and a LE belt (the big flower is actually part of the belt itself)

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