Slightly rushing to get this up, sorry.
The winner this week is NOISMINI, who gets + 0.5 next week!
Unfortunately, the loser this week is greeicyrendon1 who is eliminated.
Our bottom tow were tied and both chose the theme are you red-y!
Eve11149 - 6.68
Lucy - It took me a moment to notice the second striped piece as the shirt, but that's okay. This is a little more styled than the last look, having a bag and tights to accessories with. I'm almost a little mad at the gold detailing on the bag - I love the contrast between the bag's print and the stripes, but of course, the jacket and skirt are silver!
Leigh - Oh no, the silver with gold! I do agree with Lucy, it is a bit of a shame because the bag's texture does look so right with the stripes. Maybe some necklaces with both silver and gold could have made it look more intentional? Not sure how to feel about the top, maybe I just don't like the colour but there's something about it that makes it look awkward to me.
Myrthe - Simple but pretty outfit. I like the colours you used. Pay attention to the gold and silver details, they don't fit well together. The outfit is okay, try to do something more next time. Let us see your creatitivy? I know you can ;)
Mirdith - Well this is cute and nice. I think the top was too easy. The point in this task was combining two types of stripes and this top has the stripes very soft and not that evident. I would have liked another boots better as well. And yep, I agree with the others about the silver-gold mix.
Leigh - Oh no, the silver with gold! I do agree with Lucy, it is a bit of a shame because the bag's texture does look so right with the stripes. Maybe some necklaces with both silver and gold could have made it look more intentional? Not sure how to feel about the top, maybe I just don't like the colour but there's something about it that makes it look awkward to me.
Myrthe - Simple but pretty outfit. I like the colours you used. Pay attention to the gold and silver details, they don't fit well together. The outfit is okay, try to do something more next time. Let us see your creatitivy? I know you can ;)
Mirdith - Well this is cute and nice. I think the top was too easy. The point in this task was combining two types of stripes and this top has the stripes very soft and not that evident. I would have liked another boots better as well. And yep, I agree with the others about the silver-gold mix.
CharmedAvenger - 6.25
Lucy - I like that you matched the choker and bag, and am impressed you went for a patterned bag instead of a plain one. The belly tattoo looks a bit messy, and the orange butterflies clash with all the pink, yellow, blue and purple that's already a bit much.
Leigh - Well, a lot happened here, but also, not much? A little textured piece, like some fur or a sheer. plus a neutral hair colour could have improved this so much. This is a decent start, like Lucy said I like the bag and the choker detail giving this some colour, especially with the bold double stripes, but if you're going to feature a colour, pick just the one, not several!
Leigh - Well, a lot happened here, but also, not much? A little textured piece, like some fur or a sheer. plus a neutral hair colour could have improved this so much. This is a decent start, like Lucy said I like the bag and the choker detail giving this some colour, especially with the bold double stripes, but if you're going to feature a colour, pick just the one, not several!
Myrthe - Ow yes this has a lot of stripes! But it's a basic outfit. Try to add some more details, some more creativity and layers in your outfits, that will take it t o the next level! The combination of the shirt, skirt and shoes are fine. The bag looks a bit random to me since you didn't use anything else that was pink, maybe some other details you could have added?
Mirdith - I like how all your outfit is in black and white, and then all the accessories are in pink. I don't like though your SUPER easy choice of combining two stripes that are the same. Would have loved to see something more creative.
greeicyrendon1 - 5.37
Lucy - Those shoes! Oh, no, not with tights, not ever. Oh gosh. I do love the colour of the top and blazer, and that she did go for a patterned tight - always a bold move! Just, closed toed shoes next time.
Leigh - The chain on the jacket to match the necklace is a cute little detail, but didn't you use that skirt and top last time? I know you've got more in your wardrbobe, and there's always using the plaza so I don't know why you went for those again? The top I could excuse since it does go with the jacket colour-wise, but the skirt as well? It's a bit disappointing.
Myrthe - Oh I think you already used that shirt and top? Try to use some other items next time! Like Leighways says, the top and the jacket fit well together but I think that the bottom part isn't really fitting. Some other shoes would have been beter since it looks weird with the toes that are showing, some closed shoes would have been better here. Try not to combine silver and gold, that doesn't work most of the time (it can work). My favourite part are the top and the jacket together .
Mirdith - Oh no, no, no. You can NOT repeat combinations in a fashion competition! As they already said, the combo with the blazer is really nice, and I like your two stripped items. But... tights and sandals? Not a fan of that, at all! Also the sandals have colored jewellery that does not match with anything else on your outfit...
Myrthe - Oh I think you already used that shirt and top? Try to use some other items next time! Like Leighways says, the top and the jacket fit well together but I think that the bottom part isn't really fitting. Some other shoes would have been beter since it looks weird with the toes that are showing, some closed shoes would have been better here. Try not to combine silver and gold, that doesn't work most of the time (it can work). My favourite part are the top and the jacket together .
Mirdith - Oh no, no, no. You can NOT repeat combinations in a fashion competition! As they already said, the combo with the blazer is really nice, and I like your two stripped items. But... tights and sandals? Not a fan of that, at all! Also the sandals have colored jewellery that does not match with anything else on your outfit...
LoveFotinh - 7.13
Lucy - I want to like this so dearly! I love the kimono and skirt, and you took a risk using red a brown together... but I don't think it paid off. Perhaps you didn't look at the inspiration, because the shirt underneath and the bag look like they belong in a whole different outfit. And what's the red jagged edge behind the skirt? Oh well.
Myrthe - Oeh, I like this! The blue and red look very good together and I love the top part (what is that? A kimono?) The boots and earrings work well with it, so does colour of the skirt. I'm not really a fan of the brown bag with it. Another bottom piece would be better here, the combination with the skirt looks a bit off.
Leigh - The top and skirt is nice, the boots are fine I think but.... I have to agree with everyone, it's good until the brown bits and the weird back piece. I'm also not a fan of the glasses or earrings, they're too big together. I feel like this was a nice look you'd made before and you added the brown shirt to match the task. I'm sorry but I don't have much good to say here.
Mirdith - That's super cool and glam at the same time! I really like the stripped kimono you went for and how it looks with those chunky heeled boots (where are they from? never seen them before!). Your doll looks like a fashion magazine worker ready for fashion week and that is always good! I'm not sure about the colours of the stripped tee you used underneath. It kind of breaks the rest of the outfit in black and red.
Myrthe - Oeh, I like this! The blue and red look very good together and I love the top part (what is that? A kimono?) The boots and earrings work well with it, so does colour of the skirt. I'm not really a fan of the brown bag with it. Another bottom piece would be better here, the combination with the skirt looks a bit off.
Leigh - The top and skirt is nice, the boots are fine I think but.... I have to agree with everyone, it's good until the brown bits and the weird back piece. I'm also not a fan of the glasses or earrings, they're too big together. I feel like this was a nice look you'd made before and you added the brown shirt to match the task. I'm sorry but I don't have much good to say here.
Mirdith - That's super cool and glam at the same time! I really like the stripped kimono you went for and how it looks with those chunky heeled boots (where are they from? never seen them before!). Your doll looks like a fashion magazine worker ready for fashion week and that is always good! I'm not sure about the colours of the stripped tee you used underneath. It kind of breaks the rest of the outfit in black and red.
Reckless_ThinG - 6.25
Lucy - I love the colours in this look, especially since they co-ordinate so well with your hair. The two very different styles of stripes look interesting together, too. I just wish there was a jacket or a hat with this to give it some dimension.
Myrthe - This is a really basic outfit, nothing special. It's okay and it's not ugly! But, I want to see some more creativity and effort. The colours are okay together, but I'm not a fan of combining a short with a blouse like that. It looks empty, those heels under those shorts are just a no go for me.
Leigh - Not bad, there's not much happening in this so I'm not sure what to really say. I agree with Myrthe that this short and blouse combo looks kind of weird, the patterns are nice but if you're going to do a shorts+long sleeve combo I'd make it an Autumn look - add some sheer leggings and boots sort of thing. I do really like the colours with the shorts and bag. But if you are worried about matching your hair, just remember you can use Tress Up if you're in the plaza!
Mirdith - First of all you should need to improve the image quality. Why is it so blurry? Again, I'm referring to Lucy's post about hairs... Your hair is covering a big part of the outfit, and the vibrant colour does not help the outfit to stand out, the opposite, it is dristracting and from a different red tone that the outfit. If you do the outfit in Starplza you could have easily used on from Tress Up. I agree with Myrthe in that your outfit is a bit simple, but the combo of stripes is very cute. You should have only needed to add some more accesories and you would have a had a pretty nice outfit there!
Myrthe - This is a really basic outfit, nothing special. It's okay and it's not ugly! But, I want to see some more creativity and effort. The colours are okay together, but I'm not a fan of combining a short with a blouse like that. It looks empty, those heels under those shorts are just a no go for me.
Leigh - Not bad, there's not much happening in this so I'm not sure what to really say. I agree with Myrthe that this short and blouse combo looks kind of weird, the patterns are nice but if you're going to do a shorts+long sleeve combo I'd make it an Autumn look - add some sheer leggings and boots sort of thing. I do really like the colours with the shorts and bag. But if you are worried about matching your hair, just remember you can use Tress Up if you're in the plaza!
Mirdith - First of all you should need to improve the image quality. Why is it so blurry? Again, I'm referring to Lucy's post about hairs... Your hair is covering a big part of the outfit, and the vibrant colour does not help the outfit to stand out, the opposite, it is dristracting and from a different red tone that the outfit. If you do the outfit in Starplza you could have easily used on from Tress Up. I agree with Myrthe in that your outfit is a bit simple, but the combo of stripes is very cute. You should have only needed to add some more accesories and you would have a had a pretty nice outfit there!
Cold_Hearted - 7.16 + 0.5 = 7.66
Myrthe - Love the colour use on this! Yes for blue, white, black and red It looks really french to me and I like it. The beret with the scarf make the outfit fit together in a good way. The boots are a good thing since it fills up the empty places on the doll when using a short skirt. I like that you went for something out of your comfort zone!
Lucy - Eh. I like the top, skirt, hat and boots, it's very Paris as Myrthe said. But you've lost me with the accessories. The bag looks like it sits odd with the proportions, and I just don't like the stripes on it, to me they clash with all the other prints you have. I understand the scarf, but again, it clashes, so a plain one may have been a smarter choice.
Leigh - There's such a thing as too much print, and this is it. The top and skirt are cute, and I like the colour of the scarf, and how you tied that with the skirt flower colours, but with the bag it's just far too in-your-face and doesn't look co-ordinated. I think the dark blue strap on the bag in a light-blue outfit is not helping.
Mirdith - Yes! You went out of the comfort zone and you created a very cute outfit! I love the Parisinian vibes it gives me with the beret and the scarf, and I love you paying attention to little details as the eye-shadow. Not sure of how the bag looks with the skirt, like it's not bad, but those different patterns with different colours are so closed to each other that they collide somehow. Other than that, I really like your improvement
Leigh - There's such a thing as too much print, and this is it. The top and skirt are cute, and I like the colour of the scarf, and how you tied that with the skirt flower colours, but with the bag it's just far too in-your-face and doesn't look co-ordinated. I think the dark blue strap on the bag in a light-blue outfit is not helping.
Mirdith - Yes! You went out of the comfort zone and you created a very cute outfit! I love the Parisinian vibes it gives me with the beret and the scarf, and I love you paying attention to little details as the eye-shadow. Not sure of how the bag looks with the skirt, like it's not bad, but those different patterns with different colours are so closed to each other that they collide somehow. Other than that, I really like your improvement
Me4ever - 6.5
Lucy - This is a definitely quirky print combo, and I like you took a risk on that jacket. And the hat is adorable! But the shoes are confusing me - this is a winter outfit, so I'd expect some kind of winter shoe - and there's not a lot of accessorizing. With a jacket like this, I'd suggest a crossbody bag.
Leigh - It's...fine. The dress with the jacket is risky, maybe, but it looks to me a bit lazy, like there's no belt or bag or anything with it. The hat looks good but yeah, what is up with the shoes? They're summery in a winter look.
Mirdith - So cute! Your dolls face is really cute and the outfit you created is also super cute, with the pastel colors that hat. Not a fan of the shoes... Like at all! You're all warmy on the upper part and then you're wearing sandals? Makes no sense. Other than that, nice color combination. A little bit simple outfit, like you should have added a bag maybe or something else, if not it looks like... idk empty? Needs more!
Leigh - It's...fine. The dress with the jacket is risky, maybe, but it looks to me a bit lazy, like there's no belt or bag or anything with it. The hat looks good but yeah, what is up with the shoes? They're summery in a winter look.
Mirdith - So cute! Your dolls face is really cute and the outfit you created is also super cute, with the pastel colors that hat. Not a fan of the shoes... Like at all! You're all warmy on the upper part and then you're wearing sandals? Makes no sense. Other than that, nice color combination. A little bit simple outfit, like you should have added a bag maybe or something else, if not it looks like... idk empty? Needs more!
louisa.karemina - 7.41
Myrthe - Hmm this does something with my eyes and I don't know what, almost like an illusion things. The use of colours is good and I like the striped items you used, but not together. The skirt looks like it's part of the jacket and has some weird random shape. The bag matched well with the top part, but the bottom part of your outfits doesn't fit.
Lucy - Love the top half, don't mind the shoes, but what on EARTH is that skirt doing in this???? It's an off-white in an otherwise crisp-white look, it pokes out of the jacket oddly.... gah. I really do love the shapes and layers going on- and that you took the stripe and print count to a new level.
Leigh - I think she should have used the skirt OR the jacket - not both, because it's too much bulk and print in one space.. The jacket goes better with the bag, but the skirt goes better with the tights. I really do like the colours and prints she went for and there's no lack of the stripes.
Mirdith - If you have ditched the belt I would like this 10 times more. I like the classy style, very Blair from Gossip Girl like. Love how you kept everything in the same tones, and the addition of red was something very original to do. However, I'm not sure I like the skirt plus tights... maybe there are too many random patterns going on (jacket, skirt, tights, heels...).
Noismini - 8.32
Lucy - I'm liking this! I'm definitely into the textured furs, and the belt in the middle. Even that bag makes sense with this look! I think a hat or necklace, just some sort of accessory may have mad this look just a tad more.
Leigh - My first viewing wasn't so great, I think like Lucy said it needs some accessories. But there's a lot of fluff and fur, it's very much coordinated even with the stripes, and I like the wide fishnets with them too. Something about this makes me think I have seen this somewhere before though.
Myrthe - Oh I love this look! The stripes work well together. Smart move to put that belt in the middle of it, it kind of creates another stripe and makes the two striped prints work together very well and cohesive. The bag is cute and fits the outfit. The fishnets add something extra to this look. The boots work fine too. I agree that maybe it could have used something more? But this is a very good outfit :)
Mirdith - Oh wow! What a difference from last week! This is great, you can never go wrong with black and white! I don't have anything wrong to point out, or anything I would have preferred, very very cool entry! Well done!
Leigh - My first viewing wasn't so great, I think like Lucy said it needs some accessories. But there's a lot of fluff and fur, it's very much coordinated even with the stripes, and I like the wide fishnets with them too. Something about this makes me think I have seen this somewhere before though.
Mirdith - Oh wow! What a difference from last week! This is great, you can never go wrong with black and white! I don't have anything wrong to point out, or anything I would have preferred, very very cool entry! Well done!
Gingerzarah - 7.25
Lucy - Sometimes, less can be a little, well, more. I'd have liked either the pants or the top along with the coat, but both looks a bit awkward and undecided. I don't like the boots much, as I would have left the jacket as the textured piece and gone for something smoother. I'm glad you took a risk with this look though, and I do like the accessorizing, especially the bag and belt. They're detailed while letting the big coat shine.
Leigh - Yep, agreeing with Lucy again - don't like the boots for sure. Also, isn't the top silver and the rest gold? Not the biggest issue when regardless, the top should go. The accessorizing otherwise is real nice and that jacket is for sure difficult to pull off, especially when adding detail around it.
Mirdith - I love the boots with those pants, hat, bag and belt! But the jacket ... looks totally out of place imo. The top with the silverish stripes doesn't fully convince me with the pants in golden stripes... Maybe you could have added black and white stripes and look more cohesive, with a black leather jacket maybe? Or just a black jacket instead of that brown and colored jacket...
Mirdith - I love the boots with those pants, hat, bag and belt! But the jacket ... looks totally out of place imo. The top with the silverish stripes doesn't fully convince me with the pants in golden stripes... Maybe you could have added black and white stripes and look more cohesive, with a black leather jacket maybe? Or just a black jacket instead of that brown and colored jacket...
thank you for the feedback. Of course I checked the inspiration album, same as I did checked Lucy's blog post about the TOP 5 TIPS. In a second view, I can see clearly that you're right about the bag and the red back piece. It is not an outfit I have done before, the skirt is actually a piece and it's the first time I m using it as a skirt. Boots are limited by MUSEUM MILE and the silk striped kimono is by RIO. Your judgement counts very heavy for me, so thank you for being specific to your edits. Lovefotinh
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